Five Confessions Of A Murderer
by Simple Sensation May 7, 2007
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Today you will hear my confessions; |
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16 years ago
by Anaisthitos
This poem was very deep. I could tell he was stuck in a really deep love, and the anger of how this abusive man treated his love made the murderer decide to kill him. I think it was an amazing poem, I could imagine the struggle he was going through. I loved it! 5/5
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16 years ago
Interesting, I liked it. -T. Jane
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16 years ago
by Domino0792
Hey, hows it going? Ok so everyone who has previously commented on this poem have most likely said it all but here his my littlt opinion. I enjoyed the poem, firstly beacuse of the confessions are realistic, they felt as if one had actually committed these sins. Secondly because that this peom holds originality and flare, and an ability to reach within a reader and make them test themselves and question themselves on whether the can understand this poem and its meaning.
My favourite stanza was:
My final confession is overwhelming grief;
As I stand nearing her grave
Tears roll down as realisation occurs;
He took her life; so I took his.
This stanza has this emotional barrier and when you begin to understand this peom you can begin to understand the barrier to this stanza and its heart felt emotion! Great work, excellently penned. -xx-
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16 years ago
by Midnight Sun
Um ok...honestly, I was a little confused. I mean I couldn't really catch on to who was talking. At first it sounded like the murderer, but then it sounded like someone taking revenge on the murderer. But then I thought it might have the been the murderer who then took his own life. So I just wasn't sure. But it was an amazing idea...and it was actually chill giving. I mean after I reread it I liked it more...I would say that it has a lot of potential. I mean the main idea that threads through was very pure and it remained steady, but again it was a little confusing. I hope that made at least a little sense and helped you a little. :)
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16 years ago
We all have feelings that are confessions, but most never speak of them. I liked this poem and the meaning in it's words, "he took her life; so I took his" I really liked that line. Excellent job again 5/5
