Comments : I don't know

  • 11 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Okay, when I first saw this, I was like oh jeez, I don`t wanna read it . It was long lines then short lines, and the last line, may I add, I found was totally long for the rest of the poem, but `chu know what ? That abso`freakin`lutely rocked . Once I was done with the poem, I was like "Whoa . Now I feel dumb ."

    You hace showed me this .
    ` Have ** typo . Just noting it for you (:

    Anyways, I love how this is so just iN YOUR FACE . Like this is what I have to say to you , so THERE ! It`s totally cool . I feel that it really portrays the whole "I love you, and you don`t love me . But does it look like I care ?"
    Nicely done (: Just brilliant .

  • 11 years ago

    by Fsams

    A great poem with strongly worded meanings. Its impressive. 5/5. GOD BLESS U
    With love

  • 11 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Aww this is an awesome poem!!! it has so much emotion nd feelin in it!!!! i wish some1 cared about me like u've described lol
    luv fallen

  • 11 years ago

    by Sydney

    Ohh I love that poem. Intense emotion that drowns me into it. Awesome.

  • 11 years ago

    by Gabi

    Great poem. I loved it.

  • 11 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Thats wonderfully written. so true. deff 5/5. great job!

    xo kisses xo

  • 11 years ago

    by firexdancer

    ... i added this to my favorites, i really like your poems because you seem to be able to say exactly what you mean and it is still beautiful. i wish i could do that.
    it flowed so smoothly and you have a totally wonderful style. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by chind

    Thats a great poem.
    its kinda sad but it has lots of emotion in it.


  • 10 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Ohh! i like it.. must have been written from the heart.. you can see it in this poem.. you have a real talent.. keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Although the structure of the poem isn't great.. who cares man? the way you end your poems is just really remarkable! i got tongue tied when you said "No matter what you say or do to me, I'll always be there for you, could this be the true meaning of I love you?" wow if someone said this to me.. I'd melt! another great piece!