Okay, when I first saw this, I was like oh jeez, I don`t wanna read it . It was long lines then short lines, and the last line, may I add, I found was totally long for the rest of the poem, but `chu know what ? That abso`freakin`lutely rocked . Once I was done with the poem, I was like "Whoa . Now I feel dumb ."
You hace showed me this .
` Have ** typo . Just noting it for you (:
Anyways, I love how this is so just iN YOUR FACE . Like this is what I have to say to you , so THERE ! It`s totally cool . I feel that it really portrays the whole "I love you, and you don`t love me . But does it look like I care ?"
Nicely done (: Just brilliant .
... i added this to my favorites, i really like your poems because you seem to be able to say exactly what you mean and it is still beautiful. i wish i could do that.
it flowed so smoothly and you have a totally wonderful style. 5/5
10 years ago
Thats a great poem.
its kinda sad but it has lots of emotion in it.
Although the structure of the poem isn't great.. who cares man? the way you end your poems is just really remarkable! i got tongue tied when you said "No matter what you say or do to me, I'll always be there for you, could this be the true meaning of I love you?" wow if someone said this to me.. I'd melt! another great piece!