Comments : A Fairytale Land

  • 16 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Awwww....

    I like this poem. Very well written. It home with me because I've felt the same way before.
    Look forward to reading more of your work.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    To her, nights are like heaven
    Time when she sleeps without thought
    Dreaming of a fairytale land
    Where no pain is brought.

    ^^My favourite lines!!:-)...Great work!!...very well penned !!....Kp writing!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Ballerina

    Oh My God Very Nice Poem I Love It. 5/5

    Remembering a happier place
    When her soul was light and carefree
    Wouldn't everyone be surprised to know
    That dreaming girl is me.

    I'm Loving That Part Sweetie

    Love U Take Care.

    ~Jess~