Comments : The Beast.

  • 11 years ago

    by Gem

    Ooo! I love how you're branching out to different genre's now!
    You have a knack for this dark poetry!
    I loved how the beast could be a metaphor for so many things!! lol
    Well done

  • 11 years ago

    by Cathy

    Nice poem! Dark and yet very true. I guess everyone has a beast within, and you are so right it can be controlled. Good job! I really liked this one.

  • 11 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!.love thsi 1...well penned dark it's soo like d the description n the way u used "Beast"...great work...powerful...n true!
    Kp it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    I like the metaphor that you have created with this poem. The flow is good.



  • 11 years ago

    by Kelly

    Wow, a wicked dark poem!!
    I love it.
    I totally get what you are saying with it. Everyone has 'the beast' in them.
    Most of the time its MY OWN which scares me. Dont realise im capable of some things till they are done.
    This is a tremedous poem. Deserves nothing less than 5/5!


  • 11 years ago

    by reborn

    Same critic as for the mission. good story and really liked the end!!! the beast is actually within u. for the surprise ending and philosophic subject that it brings that's at least a 4/5!

  • 11 years ago

    by reJoyce

    I very much enjoy this dark poem, it reminds me of the book of revelation in the bible. btw just to comment on a comment u made in one of reborn's poems, there is nothing u can do to make God love u more, and there is nothing u can do to make God love u less. He along with all his angels are always listening.