If They Only Knew..

by Live WeLL   May 22, 2007


Cut me, Rip me, Tear me up,
Flip me inside-out.
Look deep inside my big brown eyes
To get to know what I'm about.

I may smile, I may laugh
but deep inside I cry for help.
When no one's watching, I let some out
But no one knows this, but myself.

No matter if I hold it back,
It always finds a way.
My pillow is flooded by the tears
and it only gets worse each day.

People think they know me
but they have not a clue.
Not a clue about my thoughts.
If they only knew...

I WROTE THIS A WHILE AGO SO IT'S NOT REALLY ABOUT HOW I FEEL NOW.. BUT DID AT ONE POINT.
PLEASE COMMENT AND I WILL RETURN THE FAVOR AS ALWAYS : )

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  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I think everybody feels like this a certain times in there lives, I know I have. The truth is how well can you really know anybody, it can be the closest person to you and you still might not know all there secrets. amazing job once again 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Wow.. this was very deep.. You captured the emotion perfectly. very good write. i know how you feel/felt when i feel the same way most the time. anyway back to the poem.. i thought this had good flow to it. and your word choice was very good also.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Wow, I know the feeling. anyway the flow was amazing, the emtion was deep and the word choice was great. you did another well done job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    I love this sooo much. i have a few kinda like it you should read & comment mine sometime :D <3<3 amanda

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