Comments : I Pledge Allegiance to the Noose {Triquatrain}

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was quite interesting, never read a poem on a topic like this which was great instead of reading alot of cliche poems all the time. Your word choice I found to be quite amazing, they were strong words which held great impact. I liked the style it was cappturing and made the poem enjoyable to read. Well done with this interesting poem i liked it alot. 5/5~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by Zeus

    This was a good poem. It had a good message and a great floe. Once again good flow and good job.

  • 10 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Wow!! You are an amazing writer. I loved this one as well. It's awesome. I love the message that we say we stand for liberty and we say we stand for justice, but those are lies. It's great. My favorite stanza would be

    You want your money? You've got it hunny;
    Look at the stupidity that you've produced.
    If we once stood tall, we're bound to fall;
    One nation under the noose.

    I love that part. 5/5 for sure!!

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Now that was truly a great read, the title caought my attention, the word choice kept it well, the imagery was clear, and the emtion was strong, I really loved this one, i believe it has to be one of my favrites by you, great job, on an intresting peice. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I loved every little piece about this one, I can't find anything to nag about and I am left speechless. This is poetry right here. Good job, Darling. ily.

    5.5
    :]
    <3

  • 10 years ago

    by jason

    Ok it was a really good poem... even though i have no clue what the word disdain means but what ever it was a really good poem = ] and i enjoyed it.. not to sure if i egt the meaning of it but i might i dont know anyways i give this one a 5/5 too

  • 10 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    I salute you for writing such a government dispising, pledge nullifying; and, fist gripping poem. It's always good to read a good poem of this sort; keeps me inspired.

    Great work here,

    Truly,
    ~Richi~

  • 10 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I like how you stayed in the subject, constantly using different words/phrases relating to what you're writing about. You come up with some very interesting pieces, you know that?

    Always a pleasure to read. =)

  • 10 years ago

    by Spirit

    An upsetting . . . but true poem sometime you need to look at life in a different way to understand whats going on. very well written 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Sheena dear, this poem has left me speechless. I know I have told you how I'm impressed with your choice of difficult titles and how you can pull them together to create amazing poetry, but this was just surpasses it all! I don't think the title could be put to any other poem. You own this title. The style ((which I love!)) was PERFECT for this poem. The flow was great and I loved the message. It was a very good poem.

    Easily 5/5.

    <3 xox
    Ciao

  • 10 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    I didnt really like it i dont know why but i didnt

    i think it could have been done diffrently 4/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I'm proud of you good poem! Yeah I did an unpatriotic poem too...Then someone complained about it so I got a friendly little email that my poem has been deleted...They didn't even send it back to me. I had to bug my friends to go through their emails to find the stupid thing so that I could save it. Sigh...Well I loved the title first of all. I loved that you mentioned gays because I'm all for the rainbow people. Revolution! Puts fist in the air* 5.

  • 9 years ago

    by amber

    I'm a very big political person, i love it. It's the truth. How can you think your not good?? you're amazing. I'd be really honored if you would take a look at some of my work and give your advice.
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 9 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Clap clap.
    its polictical its well written, it'll have an affect on everyone that reads it, because it has a statement.

    i'd also like to add, your titles of your poems are amazing.

  • 8 years ago

    by DourParoxysm

    Wow I've read a bunch of your stuff and have fallen in love with your writing. your very talented. Keep on keeping on.
    5/5

  • 1 month ago

    by Lucas Woods

    That was a great rhyme scheme for that particular poem, it could also be made into a song. Great structure...