This was quite interesting, never read a poem on a topic like this which was great instead of reading alot of cliche poems all the time. Your word choice I found to be quite amazing, they were strong words which held great impact. I liked the style it was cappturing and made the poem enjoyable to read. Well done with this interesting poem i liked it alot. 5/5~mel
Wow!! You are an amazing writer. I loved this one as well. It's awesome. I love the message that we say we stand for liberty and we say we stand for justice, but those are lies. It's great. My favorite stanza would be
You want your money? You've got it hunny;
Look at the stupidity that you've produced.
If we once stood tall, we're bound to fall;
One nation under the noose.
Now that was truly a great read, the title caought my attention, the word choice kept it well, the imagery was clear, and the emtion was strong, I really loved this one, i believe it has to be one of my favrites by you, great job, on an intresting peice. 5/5
Ok it was a really good poem... even though i have no clue what the word disdain means but what ever it was a really good poem = ] and i enjoyed it.. not to sure if i egt the meaning of it but i might i dont know anyways i give this one a 5/5 too
Sheena dear, this poem has left me speechless. I know I have told you how I'm impressed with your choice of difficult titles and how you can pull them together to create amazing poetry, but this was just surpasses it all! I don't think the title could be put to any other poem. You own this title. The style ((which I love!)) was PERFECT for this poem. The flow was great and I loved the message. It was a very good poem.
I'm proud of you good poem! Yeah I did an unpatriotic poem too...Then someone complained about it so I got a friendly little email that my poem has been deleted...They didn't even send it back to me. I had to bug my friends to go through their emails to find the stupid thing so that I could save it. Sigh...Well I loved the title first of all. I loved that you mentioned gays because I'm all for the rainbow people. Revolution! Puts fist in the air* 5.
I'm a very big political person, i love it. It's the truth. How can you think your not good?? you're amazing. I'd be really honored if you would take a look at some of my work and give your advice.