Oh, this was a wonderful poem which is written so greatly. i really enjoyed this poem and a do agree with the message, i specially liked many complex words used to make this poem more beautiful. keep it up. you are so talented.
I am speechless,really and truly blow away, I loved the flow, it was intriging, and the emtion was deep and powerful, the imagery was vivid and painted clear images in my mind, I loved the message, although I am not sure i intrupted it correctly, but at least I am honest, could you perhaps pm the meaning of the poem that you intended so I can see if it is like i thought. I don't want to sayand be wrong lol 5/5
When I read the first and second stanza.
I was like... bull.
How can Jessica right something as cliched as this?
But when I read the last stanza...
I thought of something new.
The girl possesed?
Maybe the girl was taken over.
She got part of her brain back
And was trying to get the possesor
Out of her body by pain.
If it wasn't like that...
Then I've got a heck of an imagination.
Your first two stanzas WERE kind of cliched...
Great poem and vocab.. The only thing I found wrong with it was the first line in the last stanza...it should be "overpowering cravings take over once again" great job though..it created very vivid images..5/5