Comments : Synthetic Beauty

  • That's good. only when you try it he notices everyone but you. why is that always to way it goes. or, you get noticed by everyone but him!?

  • 10 years ago

    by Kris

    WOW!
    VERY GOOD!

  • 9 years ago

    by twilightfan

    GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP IT UP!!! PCE!

  • 9 years ago

    by Taylor Badger

    I love this poem, I think almost everyone can relate to doing/feeling like that at one point in time.

  • 9 years ago

    by StandStill

    Great poem.....too bad she doesn't realize she could catch him on his own....

  • 9 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    This poem is AMAZING! before i was even a member i read this and was amazed. you are a wonderful and very talented writer. Keep it up!

  • 9 years ago

    by blind soul

    AMAZING!!!!!!!!LOVE IT KEEP IT UP!!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by unknown

    This Is Amazing
    I Admire You're Work
    Keep It Up, You've Got An Amazing Talent :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Steph

    Wow, i'm sure a lot of us can relate to that poem =) you are a wonderful writer 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    This is so me. Haha. Loved this poem, heaps unique and well written (:
    Much love,xo