That's good. only when you try it he notices everyone but you. why is that always to way it goes. or, you get noticed by everyone but him!?

WOW!
VERY GOOD!

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP IT UP!!! PCE!

I love this poem, I think almost everyone can relate to doing/feeling like that at one point in time.

Great poem.....too bad she doesn't realize she could catch him on his own....

This poem is AMAZING! before i was even a member i read this and was amazed. you are a wonderful and very talented writer. Keep it up!

AMAZING!!!!!!!!LOVE IT KEEP IT UP!!!!!

This Is Amazing
I Admire You're Work
Keep It Up, You've Got An Amazing Talent :)

Wow, i'm sure a lot of us can relate to that poem =) you are a wonderful writer 5/5

This is so me. Haha. Loved this poem, heaps unique and well written (:
Much love,xo