I Wonder
by Rahl The Layman Lord Jun 4, 2007
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Some days I look at the past |
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16 years ago
by Teria
I've read this before & left it uncommented. As you can see.
Before .. when I read it, I didn't like it.
B ut, as I read it again I do like it, a lot.
It seems to have meaning to it, of course it does, but more than last time.
Maybe because.. Hmm. NO idea, but oh well.
Last stanza is amazing, along with the question being asked.
Good Job Hunni. :]
P.S. How have I been able to go on? < Because you're just that strong, hun. :] -
16 years ago
by silvershoes
I enjoyed reading this, either because it's good to see you writing once again or because of the actual quality and message. A bit dramatic, but I think a lot of people can relate to the pain and loss you express, as well as the hope for a 'new beginning.' However, the conclusion erks me a bit. There is no point regretting things, feeling remorse perhaps...but regret? Maybe those two words are one in the same, but the ideas I percieve behind them are different. Be who you are, be happy but not at the expense of others. Ok, now I'm rambling.
I'm tired. Take care. Good writing.
5/5
