Comments : Fear [Acrostic]

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I don't know what to say lol 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Sends chills down my spine...especially the last line, that one really stops my breathing. I love it, it's so dark yet so wonderful!

  • 10 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Beautiful.
    a great acrostic. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Out of all of your poems I've read... this one's my favorite. Beautifully written acrostic there, it even rhymed. not alot of people could pull that off. Nicely done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis an excellent acrostic jane, short but great, i give it a 5/5!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Very good.

  • Well all that I have to say has already been said, Empress Jane, owner of our club.
    So I will just say 5/5 Excellent lol

  • 10 years ago

    by Grey Ajurahck

    A perfect acrostic. You've captured the essence and meaning of fear wonderfully. Ever hear the song F.E.A.R. by Ian Brown- the lyrics are phenomenal. Excellent poem.

    Peace,

    Grey Ajurahck

  • 10 years ago

    by Spirit

    One of your better ones.
    Great job well done.
    5/5