Wowwwwwwww i like it good flow 5/5

cy

You should put this under dark

Check out my the demon within its scary
how we relate. cy

Beautiful poem.I definatly know the feeling reflected here, Awsome job

You read wrong demon read ,< THE DEMON WITHIN> ITS LIKE your screaming
out tell me what you think also read
the comment from crying angel he really gets it not to many people get my stuff
but he usual does. i see koriey read your poem shes the queen of dark poems
cy

I love this poem nicole , u have soo much emotions in u that are locked up inside i love reading ur poems because you let it all out in them ..

I HAD to read this one again i love it
you can write 5/5 cy

You believe that no one will notice if you were gone.. I am sure that, that is not true.. You are probably so caught up in your pain that you can't see the world around you and those who love you and care for you standing beside you and reaching out a helping hand. I used to feel exactly like this and afterwards I realized that I was just to blind to see all the good things and people in my life.. Life is not as awful as it can seem sometime.. Think positive!