Comments : Failed me..

  • 9 years ago

    by jLegendc

    "All my dreams are lost
    Turned to dust
    By five little words
    I dont love you anymore"

    favorite part.. even a short poem can be really good.. nice one yo.. all of the poems from you that i've read so far are all depressing.. and it's so heart-grabbing... great poem!

  • 9 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Well I guess that heart felt emotions could hardly be expressed any better than you have done. Young love can be hard as this is evident in your poem. Nice job , keep it up.