Comments : I love you (Acrostic)

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    What a lovely way to spell it out.This poem is beautiful

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Mohamed..Beautiful poem m'dear..
    Excellent choice of words..probebly there is'nt a better way to express this..
    Kp up the great job!

    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    An adorable acrostic. In any case, the word 'vacant' in this line, "Vacant I feel without you", is rather unsuitable for its correct implication.

    A nicely-written, delightful read, nonetheless. I, further, adore Acrostic poems; so then I'll give you extra props for writing one. :) All the best and take care... ~Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    aaw thats so sweet, its nice to read and the flow is okay only the word vacant doesn't suit the poem very well, but further more its cute, a 5/5 from me!
    kisses stephanie

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was so touching sweetheart..you did a great job and if you don't behave picky 'Vacant' fits there
    Keep it up hunny
    With love,
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Birgit

    Aaaaaaah! Adorable ^___^

  • 10 years ago

    by Alma

    Very sweet poem. nice choice in words.
    beautiful poem 5/5

    p.s thanks for commenting

  • 10 years ago

    by Tammie

    I love this. Acrostics can be really difficult to write and get the flow and words right too without it sounding too awkward. This has no awkward spots at all and really expresses how you feel. This overall is written very well. Simple, yet says a lot. An enjoyable read. =] 5/5

    Oh and thanks for commenting my poem, I really appreciate it. =]

    Tammie

  • 10 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Wow this is outstanding and flawless. Impressive piece.

  • 10 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    I like this alot, really sweet.. looking forward to read the rest of ur work=)

  • Wow. I deffffinatly love this poem! =]] this is one of the few poems i have read that actually seem sincere & veryyy well worded.
    Awesome job.
    =]]

  • 10 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    Lol, nice.
    again, i like the way that you place your words- but maybe you could make it a little longer- no offence please, it was only my oppinion. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Fsams
    Great job on this Acrostic.
    Keep it up!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Lyric

    Aww this is a fantastic poem. it flows great and i love it. keep up the good work. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Fsams,

    Good job on this piece. It is really cute and sincere. I know if someone would give me a poem like this, I would def. make me tear up and smile. Everything was perfect in this piece. Great job. 5/5

    Jackie Marie.

  • 10 years ago

    by bRiNgMeToLiFe

    Thats really good..I would love that if someone wrote something like that for me or something:):P
    really good.
    i gave it a 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Well written..
    just beautiful
    keep it coming..
    .x

  • 10 years ago

    by Hebe

    A beautiful, sweet poem.
    Love to read it!
    Well done!

    Ps I really appreciate your comments on my poems, thank you!

  • 10 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    That's a sweet "I love you" poem. I really like the way you put the feeling across. Beautifully and poetically. I loved reading it. 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 10 years ago

    by Krysten

    Again beautifully written. simply amazing. so short yet so full of emotion. i loved it. please keep up the good work and thanksfo all of my comments. again 5/5