What a lovely way to spell it out.This poem is beautiful

Mohamed..Beautiful poem m'dear..
Excellent choice of words..probebly there is'nt a better way to express this..
Kp up the great job!

xxPoojaxx

An adorable acrostic. In any case, the word 'vacant' in this line, "Vacant I feel without you", is rather unsuitable for its correct implication.

A nicely-written, delightful read, nonetheless. I, further, adore Acrostic poems; so then I'll give you extra props for writing one. :) All the best and take care... ~Debbie

Hey,
aaw thats so sweet, its nice to read and the flow is okay only the word vacant doesn't suit the poem very well, but further more its cute, a 5/5 from me!
kisses stephanie

It was so touching sweetheart..you did a great job and if you don't behave picky 'Vacant' fits there
Keep it up hunny
With love,
Laura

Aaaaaaah! Adorable ^___^

Very sweet poem. nice choice in words.
beautiful poem 5/5

p.s thanks for commenting

I love this. Acrostics can be really difficult to write and get the flow and words right too without it sounding too awkward. This has no awkward spots at all and really expresses how you feel. This overall is written very well. Simple, yet says a lot. An enjoyable read. =] 5/5

Oh and thanks for commenting my poem, I really appreciate it. =]

Tammie

Wow this is outstanding and flawless. Impressive piece.

I like this alot, really sweet.. looking forward to read the rest of ur work=)

Wow. I deffffinatly love this poem! =]] this is one of the few poems i have read that actually seem sincere & veryyy well worded.
Awesome job.
=]]

Lol, nice.
again, i like the way that you place your words- but maybe you could make it a little longer- no offence please, it was only my oppinion. 5/5

Fsams
Great job on this Acrostic.
Keep it up!
Take Care Cindy

Aww this is a fantastic poem. it flows great and i love it. keep up the good work. :)

Fsams,

Good job on this piece. It is really cute and sincere. I know if someone would give me a poem like this, I would def. make me tear up and smile. Everything was perfect in this piece. Great job. 5/5

Jackie Marie.

Thats really good..I would love that if someone wrote something like that for me or something:):P
really good.
i gave it a 5/5

Well written..
just beautiful
keep it coming..
.x

A beautiful, sweet poem.
Love to read it!
Well done!

Ps I really appreciate your comments on my poems, thank you!

That's a sweet "I love you" poem. I really like the way you put the feeling across. Beautifully and poetically. I loved reading it. 5/5

Ravyn

Again beautifully written. simply amazing. so short yet so full of emotion. i loved it. please keep up the good work and thanksfo all of my comments. again 5/5