Comments : Desire to kill

  • 10 years ago

    by Tiffany

    True meaning
    honestly amazing
    this is some good writing keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Jaded Serenity

    Everyone feels this way, thats the scary thing, the way you captured it was amazing. don't change a thing.
    great job<
    JUlia

  • 10 years ago

    by BRiTT

    DANG, u got into it, it was tho

  • 10 years ago

    by Trishalynn

    Awsome!

  • 10 years ago

    by Miu

    Again amazing one. The ending was just simply amazing. Its just showing how much of a threat we are for ourselves. Really enjoyed it, powerful.
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    a strong poem, I like the words although I must say that the rhyming is a bit forced,, I love the ending though, 5/5 from me
    kisses stephanie

  • 10 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Amazing! Took my breath away.
    Great work!

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautifully Broken

    You are really good keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautifully Broken

    You are really good keep it up

  • Good job keep it up :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Katlette

    WOW!! I like it.. You're pretty good at writing poems... Yep.. I liked it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Briana

    Wow. this poem is very interesting. i dont really get the whole odea of killing yourself, but it doesn't sound that nice. take care

  • 10 years ago

    by ScaredToSeeMe

    A good poem
    I don't really get what you mean
    but I like it
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Oh gosh! this poem is intriguing!! even though its short i spent 3 mins cuz i wanted to keep reading it over and over again.. great job.. the flow was gd and u didnt force any rhymes it came out naturally beautiful.. great job! I LOVE IT

  • 10 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    OMFG! That is awesome! I like this one the most! Why isn't it on your featured list?! lol I like it alot. Best one (dark poem) I've ever read!

  • 10 years ago

    by Natalie84

    DAMN!!!! THAT IS GOOD!!!!! WOW!!!!! The ending was a surprise!!! This is it!!! In this case your shortness was excellent because you left me wanting more!!! When you leave your readers wanting to know more about the story you know you have done some good writing. I LIKE!!!!!!!!!!!! Nice write!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Nice. :) (5/5)

    Ayu <3

  • 10 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    This is really good. really emotional i guess you could say that... its scary too , but in a good way :)
    <3jess

  • 10 years ago

    by moonlil

    Well, done poem. I like it very much.

  • 10 years ago

    by Quiet One

    Very good poem
    I like it...its so descriptive and scary...great job