Comments : The beauty of shadows and blood

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I liked the mystery here and there as it thrilled me so much..And the topic was really unique and haunting

    But I would like to help you with a thing
    If you use as instead of and at the first stanza,it would be perfect

    Other than that dear
    It was beatifully penned
    Take care
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by isabel

    Nice poem...
    but don't you mean "meets the eye" in the 4th stanza? just asking...=)
    i liked this...i like vampires =)
    usually darkness and vampires are described like they were horrible, but not here...
    i like the beauty within this poem...=))
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautifully Broken

    Hell, i love it, damn i really love it

  • 10 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Beautiful poem!!..well written hehe i like vampires..well written
    hope to read more like it!!:D
    breexx

  • 10 years ago

    by Ixora

    Aww i like it...i love vampires and this was a good tribute to them...5 stars

    *^*crow*^*

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, so good. (i wrote something similar before.)
    I like the powerful and magnificent atmosphere that you created. Your wording is superb, i like the last stanza the most. This poem deserves 5/5, if you want you can r/r/c one of mine.

  • 7 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    Full of passion and beauty....I like how you constructed this amazing poem...god bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-