but don't you mean "meets the eye" in the 4th stanza? just asking...=)
i liked this...i like vampires =)
usually darkness and vampires are described like they were horrible, but not here...
i like the beauty within this poem...=))
Wow, so good. (i wrote something similar before.)
I like the powerful and magnificent atmosphere that you created. Your wording is superb, i like the last stanza the most. This poem deserves 5/5, if you want you can r/r/c one of mine.