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by Numb Handed Jun 13, 2007
Love, romance /
to the beat
with your own two feet
til im weak in the knees
along with me
sitting under our tree
me till the end of time
even if i run out of rhymes
me like no other
i want you to be my childs mother
here with me until the end
oh how our hearts and emotions blend
me safe and away from harm
And ill hold you in my arms
the act with all the males
be with me and tell me your tales
me so i may be complete
so i know longer have to compete
I love you so
lets lay here and watch the world go
are what we are
take me away somewhere far
I loved the way you formatted this poem. Taking each word singly and then completing the thought. I may try that myself. Did you see that done or come up with that yourself?
I really liked your poem, and I added it to my favorites.
Your poem can all be summed up in one word: love.
by Quiet Storm
I really liked this poem, it was great