Comments : Pretend

  • 16 years ago

    by Cheshire Kat

    Take Another Look at the Truth. That's the only name I can think of. Nice poem--it's flows just like a song. "<3"ed it! ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    I absolutly adore this! I dont think there is a better title, and I dont think that there is a better way to have written this. Definately keep writting!!

  • 16 years ago

    by LyricallyBroken

    I really liked that!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Great poem....i liked it alot...it was very well written...........~*~Cindy~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    I think pretend fits this poem quite well...once again a very good poem. it hade nice flow and the wording was very well done.

    Absolutely a great poem 5/5

    keep up the great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Autumn

    Thank you.