Comments : Bullseye.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    This poem, I love it. When I read it, it kept reminding me of the new relationship I am in. It is a well-written piece. It really is. Good job hun.

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem really has a nice flow and rhyme scheme. I must say I am impressed with your pure and cute description of romantic love. The poem also reflects the mischief of cupid. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    That was really nice n so true....
    Good job!!

    God bless u

  • 10 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Woooooowww!!!! i really like this one it's so sweet, really sweet indeed!!! i loved how u put all the words in ech lines and stanzas, and the meaning too!! EXCELLENT WORK KEEP IT UP!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Oh my...
    This is beautiful.
    I adore this...it is so pretty and meaningful...by the time I finished reading I was left with a smile on my face...elegantly written and very touching.