Wow, that was beautiful. i loved it. its amazing.
i ust recently went through a breakup so i can relate to this poem.
i love this line:

Sometimes you just need to give up,
sometimes you just fall asleep to see tomorrow.

great write. 5/5

This was an excellent poem. THe expertise with which you wrote the poem was mindblowing. I think you did an excellent job on this and it really touched me.

Wow this is an amzing poem 5/5 it flowed together smoothly. i especially liked the last paragraph

~NinjaGirl~

Aww, that was really nice.
Something most couples go through.
Sihinta xx