It was so sweet and touching..And you did a good job even though it is your first acrostic poem as you told in the deal..And I loved teh wording,it was eliminated for sure..and the flow was great
Keep it up,
Wow. this is really cute <3
its sad but i think it is still amazing.
i normally really dislike the way some people wrte Acrostic poems because i think they always make them seem like really random sentences, but in this poem you captured the whole point of Acrostic poems... you don't have to base the poem around the letters, you can base the letters around the poem.
its really good... keep up the good work.
Beautiful poem. I tend not to like acrostic poems very much, but I loved this one. Your a great writer. Keep up the good work. Oh, and hopefully things will get better with "her". Wish you the best.
To begin with, I commend you for writing a formed poetry, which I dearly am fond of--Acrostic. You grasped my attention with the poem's admirable lines and phrases, especially the beginning line. Additional props for the fine word choice as well as for writing a tribute for a love unrequited. I, however, noticed the redundancy of the poetic phrases you used, as follows:
"Aura of pulchritude," ~ "Light of beauty,"
"Incalculable loves," ~ "Numerous affections,"
I further had observed how this piece lacked poetic rhythm and flow whereby it made it quite difficult for me to connect to it. It's a fine Acrostic, nevertheless. Thanks for sharing. ~Marian
Beautiful lines . You chose the vocabulary carefully, and it worked out nice . I don't read these type of poems often, but you really make me want to read more . It lacked some flow, but it's good either way .