It was so sweet and touching..And you did a good job even though it is your first acrostic poem as you told in the deal..And I loved teh wording,it was eliminated for sure..and the flow was great
Keep it up,
Laura

Great, you have wrote this perfectly. very nicely written....

by the way, acrostic is my favorite style.
keep it up

Wow. this is really cute <3
its sad but i think it is still amazing.
i normally really dislike the way some people wrte Acrostic poems because i think they always make them seem like really random sentences, but in this poem you captured the whole point of Acrostic poems... you don't have to base the poem around the letters, you can base the letters around the poem.
its really good... keep up the good work.
5/5
<3jess

Dang!!! ur hav lik awesome word choice(did u cheat and look in the dictionary?) some words i donk even know lik the first line..wow..awsome..haha

Aww this is really sweet. Unfortunte that she dunst feel the same but keep writin.. a really liked it
<3 Jenni xx

Naww that's very sweet.. =]]
5/5
.x

Beautiful poem. I tend not to like acrostic poems very much, but I loved this one. Your a great writer. Keep up the good work. Oh, and hopefully things will get better with "her". Wish you the best.
*Brittney

Great use of words very well written 5/5 keep it up

laura

Beautiful, you really took acrostic to the next level, congrats. great write

To begin with, I commend you for writing a formed poetry, which I dearly am fond of--Acrostic. You grasped my attention with the poem's admirable lines and phrases, especially the beginning line. Additional props for the fine word choice as well as for writing a tribute for a love unrequited. I, however, noticed the redundancy of the poetic phrases you used, as follows:

"Aura of pulchritude," ~ "Light of beauty,"

"Incalculable loves," ~ "Numerous affections,"

I further had observed how this piece lacked poetic rhythm and flow whereby it made it quite difficult for me to connect to it. It's a fine Acrostic, nevertheless. Thanks for sharing. ~Marian

I know how you feel! And your feelings really show in your poem! 5/5

I dont know a whole lot about these kinds of poems.....

but good word choice, and i like the contrasts. its sad too. good job.

That was really sweet and touching, and had a nice flow.
Good job!
:)
KAra

Beautiful lines . You chose the vocabulary carefully, and it worked out nice . I don't read these type of poems often, but you really make me want to read more . It lacked some flow, but it's good either way .
..__MiNDYY

Wow,that was so sweet & heartfelt.
the flow was really good,the love was definitly there.5/5 great write.
--lexie

Wow man, its seldom that i come across other people with good vocabulary in here. cheers to that. and this was an excellent write. i espeicaly liked the first and last lines.

(: Tom

Wow very nice, well adhered to the rule and well penned. I love Acrostics and Etherees. Great 5/5 keep it up. tc

Very simple with a good strong deep ending. love it =]

Such a sweet poem.
Beautiful piece of writing.
Hope things will work out with 'her'
Best wishes, take care

Wow, it was so sweet, i'm sorry that you dont think she feels the same way, it was such a lovely acrostic, well done. 5/5