Thats actually very very good, i read it a few times just taking it all in. well done i really like it

I really loved it for sure:):)

there's no deny that for sure a goooood one:)

keep it up:)

khuloodan:)
smile all the time:):)

Omg this is so sad. this poem is so brutal yet i cnt look away. its brilliantly written and i loved it... very sad though

Woah this poem was really touching! full of emotion nd feeling i really luved it
5/5
luv Fallen xx

Wow.i recently had a close friend take his life also,its so hard to accept.that was a beautiful poem,so raw and true.thats exactly how i like poetry.
"I fell to the earth in a rage of tears"
that was my favorite line,i did the same thing when i found out.
thanks for commenting on mine.
stay strong and if you wanna talk just let me know.
--lexie

OMGAH! i cried when i read this "no joke" i am so so so so so so so so so so so sorry about what has happened to you! i am so very sorry your happiness has been taken away it just isnt fair...