I really enjoyed your poem I especially like the and shield part you said! fantastic~i hope to write like that one day! thank you for your lovely work.

Cheers Ian

"No matter the distance, the impossibility of it all,I will find and I will answer whenever you may call" Thats a lie and you know it, I got the machine twice, so much for forever Jane. Excellent job once again Especially the last stanza - Amazing 5/5 GG69

Wow I did not realize what is was missing this poem is truly beautiful band whatever else I could say to do it justice

Loveeedd it nice job. it had alot of emotion in it which i liked
5/5 yay!
<3 emma

Very Very Nice.... 5/5 With Reality of heart feeling....:)