This was beautiful. I loved how descriptive and peaceful it was. The flow was great, it made for a very pleasant read. I do feel like there's some punctuation missing through out, but nothing serious lol. Great write, 5/5
Okay. I frikken love this.
The imagery you painted in this was awesome, it creates very vivid images for me, it was like I could see and hear everything that was happening.
The flow is perfect throughout the entire piece and the ending was beautifully wrapped up.
I love it. though the last three stanzas werent as good as the rest... I'm not saying they're bad. >.< I'm just saying i dont like them as much as the rest. I felt like the rhyme scheme was messed up. that's the only reason.
other than that, I totally dig it. nicely written. 5/5
I think the best two things about this poem was the rhymes and the imagery you created. I can't quite choose between the first and third stanzas, and so I'll jsu have to say like them both equally and that they are both my favorite stanzas.
I'm truly, for the first time, jealous of someone else's poem. Amazing piece of work. I was engulfed with imagery and simply reading the poem soothed the very depth of my inner most self. I am not kidding, i love this life giving piece of art.