This poem is great, wording is superb and atmosphere that you created is amazing. You really described nature very good. 5/5

This poem was deffinatly diffrent. and i love diffrent :) it made me smile. good work

i especially loved the lines

"The morning broke the dancing,
As warmth stole the dark,
Unhidden from the eyes,
And subsided from their hark,

Leaving all but ripples,
The moon now unseen,
No music and no dance,
No knowing of what been.
"

i read them over a million times. it had great rythem and a gentle tone. good work

(ps- i don't vote because i think ths voting system is corrupt)

Wow..u have a gre8 poem..i love i:D
the flwo and the imagery was awesome aswell
keep up the gr8 work
tk care
bree

Hey moo moo. this is ... well.... amazing. it was beautiful and descriptive. i love everything about it. i love you. cya tomorrow sweetie.
-Snoo xox

This was beautiful. I loved how descriptive and peaceful it was. The flow was great, it made for a very pleasant read. I do feel like there's some punctuation missing through out, but nothing serious lol. Great write, 5/5

marcella

This was really beautiful! What a lovely midsummer nights dream type of picture it formed in my mind. Very creative and very different.

Loved it (5/5)

One thing tho - in the last stanza -
Leaving all but ripples,
The moon now unseen,
No music and no dance,
No knowing of what been.

I think you should make the last line "No knowing of what had been" - just a suggestion.

Mo

Very beautiful and descriptive. The title is very captivating, and the poem didn't disappoint me at all. You created gorgeous and very vivid imagery.
Keep up, 5/5 from me.

I loved this, it gave a perfect picture of the poem, so vivid and bright. and it flowed very well and smoothly, it was just absolutely beautiful.
5/5
gabriella

I absolutely love this piece! It is very
cleverly written, with perfect flow, beautiful
imagery and descriptions and wonderful vocab.

The third stanza is my favorite! (:
Excellent write! Keep it up!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Okay. I frikken love this.
The imagery you painted in this was awesome, it creates very vivid images for me, it was like I could see and hear everything that was happening.
The flow is perfect throughout the entire piece and the ending was beautifully wrapped up.
Just...beautiful.

I love it. though the last three stanzas werent as good as the rest... I'm not saying they're bad. >.< I'm just saying i dont like them as much as the rest. I felt like the rhyme scheme was messed up. that's the only reason.

other than that, I totally dig it. nicely written. 5/5

So pretty
I love it!
Great job

I think the best two things about this poem was the rhymes and the imagery you created. I can't quite choose between the first and third stanzas, and so I'll jsu have to say like them both equally and that they are both my favorite stanzas.

Brad

I'm truly, for the first time, jealous of someone else's poem. Amazing piece of work. I was engulfed with imagery and simply reading the poem soothed the very depth of my inner most self. I am not kidding, i love this life giving piece of art.

Loves it :3