Comments : A Lover's Paradise (Triquatrain)

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is an excellent love poem! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    The fact that you employed a poetic form, by way of a traditional vocabulary, is endearing; plus, how you've written this piece in such a classy manner have fairly fascinated me. It's a delicious read. Nicely done, nonetheless. Thanks for sharing! 5/5 ~Marian

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Really beautiful Wallace, I enjoyed reading this piece. I found it to be capturing and heartfelt. An amazing structure which was tight. This had something different throughout it. Well done with writing an amazing poems. ~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by gorgeous girl

    This was a very good poem.... it was awsome.. I liked it.

  • 10 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    Tht was rele good....

  • 10 years ago

    by Krystal

    Hey i realli like it and thanks for the pointer i might just have to use it...no i will

  • 10 years ago

    by Spirit

    It is one of my favorite poems 5/5
    great work i can think of nothing to change.

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very creative and unique, the descriptions in the poem are flawless. Nicely written and so emotional poem.
    The third stanza is my favorite.
    Well done, great job on this one.

  • 10 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Very beautiful, you have a creative way of writing. A good piece!! Good job, I enjoyed it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I loved this, it was beautiful and creative. A very good piece that flowed well and was worded so perfectly
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Brilliant poem...i really like the style you used in this one..it was interesting... its something new that i havent read yet...

    the flow and rhyming were great and the words you used were so beautiful...5/5 once again.=]

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't prefer love poetry, this poem is written nicely but it isn't my type of poetry. Repetition of first stanza was very effective.

  • 10 years ago

    by Adelle

    I love the rhythm and flow of this piece it is written in a way that it captures the reader’s soul.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This was quite beautiful. The flow was flawless. A wonderful triquatrain. 5/5

    marcella

  • 9 years ago

    by Blissful

    Are you really 14? You poerty is just amazing!! Some published pieces I have read are nothing compared to some of your pieces. They truly blow me away. Well done *5/5*

  • 9 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    You have a wonderful talent for formed poetry. You pulled this one of beautifully.

    I particularly liked how you repeated the first stanza as the last, I thought that made for a powerful effect on the overall piece.

    This was a beautiful write and an even greater read.

  • 9 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I love this one, it really shone mainly because im in love lol. I really liked the repetition in it . xxx alex xxx