I usually don't give a 5/5 to a poem so very short, but this piece was really fantastic. The words are so powerful and they grab you with such force. I can't give this poem anything but 5/5 Amazing job GG23
That was really good. You put a lot of thought into it. I can't seem to follow rules when it comes to the different types of poetry. The best I can do is a sonnet. So great job and I really loved the depth of this poem.
You know, I really love this style of poetry it's most interesting but I never find many people who can actually pull them off and deserve a 5/5 with them. This is exactly what you did though. I found the vocabulary to be really effective and strong. A good read. Well done.~mel
"lol that was longer than the poem." -- Lmao! Sorry, that made me laugh. =/
Anyway, this is another form of poetry I've yet to try. In fact, I've rarely read this form of poetry either. I'm actually not that big of a fan of poetry such as this, however, you had me hooked. Each word just kind of brought a different image to my head, and I wanted to read on and on.