Comments : Soul [Diamante]

  • 11 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I usually don't give a 5/5 to a poem so very short, but this piece was really fantastic. The words are so powerful and they grab you with such force. I can't give this poem anything but 5/5 Amazing job GG23

  • 11 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very few lines with great imagery and meaning. Wel adhered to the rule an d well penned. Tc

  • 11 years ago

    by Debbie

    I do love a good Diamante. =]

    I liked the fact that these two divergent icons are seemingly symmetrical with the other. Though it was short, it truly was delightful to read.

    Best wishes.


  • 11 years ago

    by unknown

    I typed word "diamante" at search box, and only found 2 poems. And yours is better than the other.
    More powerful and meaningful.. :)
    Good job.
    Nice poem..

  • 11 years ago

    by Teria

    Best Diamante I've read in a LONGG time.
    Amazing word choice, extremely beautiful.
    Gave the perfect image.
    I loved ittt.
    A lot.

    Usually, I'm not too fond of small poems.
    Esepcially Diamante, but you're good.
    Keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by Wallace

    Lol, nice poem and yea the discription of the style was longer than the poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Verity Han

    Fantastic adjectives and formatting (though its already fixed...). I especially liked all the short, powerful words you used such as "feverent" and "scintillating". Bravo!

  • 11 years ago

    by Becca

    That was really good. You put a lot of thought into it. I can't seem to follow rules when it comes to the different types of poetry. The best I can do is a sonnet. So great job and I really loved the depth of this poem.

  • Amazing! I like how you used the words loved&decieved.Keep writing like that.It was really really good.5/5


  • 11 years ago

    by Melpomene

    You know, I really love this style of poetry it's most interesting but I never find many people who can actually pull them off and deserve a 5/5 with them. This is exactly what you did though. I found the vocabulary to be really effective and strong. A good read. Well done.~mel

  • 11 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    I love it. It is so different from other poems that i have read. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    I've never heard of that form before, but I think it was great.
    A very good word choice.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 11 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i love this type of poetry. it was amazing and i loved the words you used. great work 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    "lol that was longer than the poem." -- Lmao! Sorry, that made me laugh. =/

    Anyway, this is another form of poetry I've yet to try. In fact, I've rarely read this form of poetry either. I'm actually not that big of a fan of poetry such as this, however, you had me hooked. Each word just kind of brought a different image to my head, and I wanted to read on and on.

    Good job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    Ooo, i love these fomats and the vocab you have used for this one is fantastic!
    You've done this form justice =)