Wow antoun this is absolutely amazing... i cant believe it!! the metephors and comparissions capture every line! you are brilliant!!! tthere are so many lines that i love i cant even chose one! but the first one that stood out to me would be
"For all things that diminish truth,
Is the poison that kills humanity."

ANNDDD

"Like glass upon your bitter tongue,
Be warned to speak purely."
wow that line is crazy!! i would never even think to write that..you hgave definately insipred me to write antoun...amazing work

i miss you!! keep writing..
remember, smile*

I like this one...very interesting poem,...well penned...5/5for sure:)..keep up the good work...your friend *Melody*:)

Beautiful penned... very inspiration and sending good message to the reader...Awesome "You'd better slow down, Don't dance so fast, Time is short, The music won't last. When you run so fast to get somewhere, You miss half the fun of getting there. When you worry and hurry through your day, It is like an unopened gift....
Thrown away... Life is not a race. Do take it slower Hear the music Before the song is over."

Keep the coming, and thanks for your comment on mine, i very appreciated! take care.

From west.

Wow..it was amazing...emotionaly writen..
i think. this poem.. its comes from the heart and goes through the heart..

It was as if it was effortless to be so beautiful. Loved it!!