Comments : My Life...

  • 16 years ago

    by oddi tea

    Interesting poem. It is sad, and heart-breaking, but still cool. I like the descriptiveness. Ill talk to you later. May god bless your day

  • 16 years ago

    by LovexMe

    This is a good poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Wow gr8 poem!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Your poem has a great flow and expresses feelings candidly

  • 16 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    Nice poem... i liked it..

  • 16 years ago

    by Travis

    Cool sometimes i feel like that

  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    This poem is so full of emotion 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    It is a poem I can get behind and say: I believe I've felt this poem before. I really Identify with this; do think, though, that you can add more at the end to enforce your feeling of over-turning past-doubt, it would add loads of complexity to it.

    Ubadooba! Great write!