Comments : Starbucks.

  • 10 years ago

    by limp

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  • 10 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    New poems with new writing style, nigga.

  • 10 years ago

    by Espoirfailed

    Loving it like every poem you write.
    don't get the title, but never do.

  • 10 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Its always refreshing to see when the title is no where to be found through the entirety of the poem...it makes it unique and idk, ive just always loved it...amazing work, keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ...guessing the title is where it was written?...

    I found myself wishing there were some spaces between some groups of lines.. ....helps to better See the poetry that way...l.Caffeine will tend to contribute to run on phrasing......

    Otherwise....my favorite moment:

    "they say the warm summer heat isn't something that
    keeping a cool head can beat,
    but don't discount the old winter winds.
    and all the cold shoulders the slightest draft lets in"

    all in all...a wonderfully evocative rant....