Comments : The Last Big Holiday

  • 10 years ago

    by Silently He walks

    You expressed so much using so little. great job man

  • 10 years ago

    by Twobit

    Wonderful piece, bro! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Civil Hatori

    Gasttlee,
    Like all of your poetry, this is a truly incredible poem! The words were perfect and formed such an image in my mind that I was entrapped the moment I set eyes up your poem. The first stanza:

    Pleasant nights.
    Snowy whites.

    Was very unique. "snowy whites" I love that ^.-
    Keep it up, and if it was possible, a full out 6/5!!! ^_^ This was a pleasure to read!

    With all due respect,
    Hatori

  • Hehehe!!!!Christmas stuff makes me feel all warm&fuzzy inside!*LOL*I like it alot!It was pretty short but to the point.5/5^_^

    <3Amber

  • 10 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Beautiful poem, keep up the good works. Thank You for all your comments.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gasttlee
    What a delightful piece. Really brought a smile to my face :)
    Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well it was a good poem, I wish you made it longer though..

    Thanks for the comment.

  • 10 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Really like the structure and word choice.
    Great piece of writing.
    Loved reading it.
    Take care

  • 10 years ago

    by SeXiSaMi

    Amazingly written... well done
    5/5 =)

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    I loved the happy feeling and the length of your poems..They are so easy to understand and so meaningful

    Beatifully penned,
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very unique and splendid. Perfect poem worth 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 10 years ago

    by Wake

    Wow.. a truly splendid piece.. bought great joy to me as i was reading this.. i love it..

    and 0mG.. these lines..

    "..Blue sky.
    Hope high.

    Wrapped gifts.
    Love lifts.."

    just..WOW>. fit so beautifully together.. an amazing write. :D

    ~Wake~

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    A beautiful piece of poetry. The rhyme and flow wee flawless. 5/5

    marcella

  • 10 years ago

    by broken reflection

    The flow was brilliant, the message simply put, i loved it 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    Very nice. Nice rhyming. Great flow.
    So appropriate for this time of year.
    A heart felt write. Good job!

  • 8 years ago

    by Alex

    Aw! How cute! I loved it. So jolly!! :)

    ~*Alex*~