My Elfish Adventure

by Stephanie Naylor   Jul 26, 2007


It was just Christmas eve
and I was just wondering when he would come and leave

I a awoke as i heard a clatter
and then i heard something shatter

I ran down stairs straight to the Christmas tree
And there he was, there he be, Santa all merry

I stood there in shock
and the only thing that broke the silence was
the grandfather clock

I heard him leaving presents out for me
and then i thought WAIT
could this really be

I jumped out of hiding to say HI
Santa jumped and said, "oh dear, oh my"

He asked what i was doing out of my bed
and i told him i heard the reindeer above my head

He asked if i wanted to help get presents to everyone
I sat next to him in the sleigh, my smile burning brighter than the sun

I glanced up at Santa with glee
and he just smiled back at me

We rode from house to house
being quiet and sneaker than the smallest mouse

Wake up I heard my mom say
its time to start a bright new day

I went downstairs and looked in my stocking
and there was a note

i just stood looking at it
and for a second I was remote

Then I took it and read it through
and it said something i should have knew

It was Santa thanking me for all I had done
This wasn't the last of my elfish ways
because those have just begun

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i wrote this in the 6th grade. I know its stupid but comments and votes PLEASE!!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by White Chocolate Dynamite

    I wish I could of wrote like that when i was in 6th grade lol, very nice. 5/5 always.

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    The merriment and innocence brought forth by the young character was charming. The pitch was jovially pleasing and the emotion raw and well conveyed. This was a joy to read. I truly enjoyed this piece, Stephanie.

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Excellent poem. 5/5 all the way and no flaws in this piece

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    OMG 6th grade?? Wow I loved this piece. It really shows your versatility and ability to write poems. The rhymes are beautiful with nice vocab used. The rhythm is there in this piece. 5/5 all the way

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, even in your 6th grade you were an amazing writer.
    this poems shows the beauty of a great poem and shows your great talent.
    keep up the great work as always.

    a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.