Comments : Plop

  • 10 years ago

    by audrey harris

    Aww, that's cute! lol how funny!

  • 10 years ago

    by ALEX

    Wow.. haha. Yeah. That made me laugh. =D This is a 4/5 for me, just because of grammar mistakes and parts where the flow was off just a smidge. This is super great for a first poem! Good job, and keep writing.
    -Parker

  • 10 years ago

    by ADifferentSoul

    I feel exactly the same way as he does ^

  • 10 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This is so cute! it made me laugh well done few grammer mistakes but it was god

  • 10 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    Hahaha very cute who doesnt like dr. seuss?
    but yea umm nice rhythm
    woo

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Yeah, this was cute.
    It had a message inside, and was very catchy.
    well done
    love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Hah cute! I love Dr. Seuss he's amazing isn't he. I think a lot of little kids would love and learn from this story nice work
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    And you are a Dr. Seuss expert. ^_^ I loved it. I usually don't like funny poems that much but I enjoyed this one. I just pictured it in my head. :) I gave it a five. Yay! ---->5

    • 3 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments!

  • 10 years ago

    by Marie

    Dr seuss is da BOMB lol... u did really well with this poem, your rhyme scheme/flow was extremelely well kept and the story fit it well because of it's child-like morale. lol.. i know this will sound wierd but my favorite part is how you used a lime.. I would've never thought a lime.. it's such a unique fruit to use in poetry... like.. most would have said like tomato or something... I love it!

    • 3 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ixora

    Aww what a perfect first poem i really love it...and i think children would to. Great lesson though i think some adults would do well to learn it too ^-*

    *^*crow*^*

  • 10 years ago

    by Liz

    Aww haha that's cute!
    5/5 -Liz

  • 10 years ago

    by Hayley

    Ha nice its a good kids poem!!! keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by nikki

    I'm not a big fan of dr seuss , but this was a great piece. i loved the way it all came together and sounded so good. wonderful job. 5/5

    nikki

    • 3 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments!