The rhyming skeem...skeim...skiem...arg whatever! The rhyming reminds me of some of my old 2005 poems. 5<--Looky a five! 0_O

I feel this way a lot nowadays! 5/5

WOW. That much anger isn't healthy... But it was a great poem!

Wow. the rhyming was in simple words but i think that is what made it so good. great work 5/5

Very original and interesting piece. You expressed anger greatly. Every stanza is superb but my favorite is third. This piece really deserves 5/5

Unique and interesting. You really take my breath away with every words and every thing you portray. Keep up the good work!