I don't care if it was random!! It was awesome! Seriously! I love the last two lines in the last stanza! It made me feel happy and reminded me of something important. It reminded me of being alive! I love this, I'm adding this to my fav! 5/5
Amazing write. Very original and the colors were so well portrayed. I havent read your other poems, but if i was writing like that while having writers block i would want to have it all the time :D
Truely wonderful write!
Umm.. okay.. w/e about the writers block!!! haha this poem was amazing!! i mean is amazing, and will forvever be amazing!!
so it so well written with amazing thoughts and idea.. especially for being random!!.. wow.. i am amazed. good job. i love it!!
can you please do two of mine.. try my random one drink drank drunk, and any other ones that catch the eye.. thanx :)
This was wonderful. I like how each colour reflects an emotion. It is true, that colours represent different aspects of our life, and different aspects of our emotions. The rhyming and flow were beautifully handled in this piece.
Enchanting. You capture your theme with a colorful detail that makes it wholly engaging to read. The dynamic approach of colors embodying a person's disposition and nature holds the reader's interest throughout, along with a very good development of the plot. A delightful read. I truly enjoyed this piece, Sam. Nice work.
This poem is one of the most unique poems I have ever read if you can write this when you havent been wrighting muvh lately then I would love to read soem of the things you write when your really in the mood I usally try and leave some kind of helpfull improvement but this needs none.
Wonderful poem! I love how you made colours represent an emotion that everybody goes through in live. The flow was good but I think in stanza three, that the line "This is when we all break down", throughs off the flow a little bit but maybe that's just me. And the rhyming was great.
Wow i really like this...alot.....the flow is perfect...and the rhyming is perfect too.. i really dont know what to say.....you could probably do more colors..that would be awesome i know you're talented enough to do it....
i dont see any improvement needed on this one..nice job.5/5 =]
I cant really say anything bad about this..the flow was great and you had nice descriptions and metaphors..and i liked the uniqueness of it..plus it also had emotion within each color..and the message was good..loved it! Keep up the great work! 5/5
this poem was really well expressed and the flow was magnificent.
It was really heartfelt and showed your talent.
Yet I noticed that there wasn't as much emotion in this poem as if could of had. You explain what the color of the rain and the color of sadness was, yet you didn't describe the sensation of it. This poem would really stand out if you had gone one step deeper and indulged in this piece and explained your feelings with each color.
But in all you did great!!
I really enjoyed it.
I liked how you put punctuation in this piece,
it was as a sweet song.
You did fantastic.