Comments : The Colors Of Life

  • 10 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Writer block, my --- . I loved the idea of colors and how you portrayed each of them with a common emotion . The flow was good, and the words were just perfectly chosen . I loved it . Nicely written .

    ..__MiNDYY

  • 10 years ago

    by Riz

    I don't care if it was random!! It was awesome! Seriously! I love the last two lines in the last stanza! It made me feel happy and reminded me of something important. It reminded me of being alive! I love this, I'm adding this to my fav! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I really enjoyed reading this. It was flawless! Great flow, exceptional word usage and rhymes. Definite 5/5 I can't really think of anything to criticize lol. Wonderful write!

    marcella

  • 10 years ago

    by Miu

    Amazing write. Very original and the colors were so well portrayed. I havent read your other poems, but if i was writing like that while having writers block i would want to have it all the time :D
    Truely wonderful write!
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Angela

    Umm.. okay.. w/e about the writers block!!! haha this poem was amazing!! i mean is amazing, and will forvever be amazing!!
    so it so well written with amazing thoughts and idea.. especially for being random!!.. wow.. i am amazed. good job. i love it!!
    <3ang

    can you please do two of mine.. try my random one drink drank drunk, and any other ones that catch the eye.. thanx :)

  • 10 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was wonderful. I like how each colour reflects an emotion. It is true, that colours represent different aspects of our life, and different aspects of our emotions. The rhyming and flow were beautifully handled in this piece.

    Excellent work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    Enchanting. You capture your theme with a colorful detail that makes it wholly engaging to read. The dynamic approach of colors embodying a person's disposition and nature holds the reader's interest throughout, along with a very good development of the plot. A delightful read. I truly enjoyed this piece, Sam. Nice work.

  • 10 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Very original idea, I loved it. Some of my best poems were pretty random, too :-) The flow, the rhyming, the vocab, everything was great. Excellent job, dear :)))) 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I LOVE THIS POEM TO DEATH, the colors
    and the way that you described ecerything
    was amazing.And the rhyming was flawless
    and it didnt seem forced at all
    it was such a great poem

    nice job

    a well deserved

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Phil

    Wow Sam this latest poem was well worth the wait
    A brilliant piece of poetry, the flow was amazing, the idea was just superb, all I can say is Wow.

  • 10 years ago

    by shade127

    Again another beautifully written piece of art. The entire poem flowed and made for an easy read. Brilliant!

  • 10 years ago

    by Adelle

    This poem is one of the most unique poems I have ever read if you can write this when you havent been wrighting muvh lately then I would love to read soem of the things you write when your really in the mood I usally try and leave some kind of helpfull improvement but this needs none.

  • 10 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Wonderful poem! I love how you made colours represent an emotion that everybody goes through in live. The flow was good but I think in stanza three, that the line "This is when we all break down", throughs off the flow a little bit but maybe that's just me. And the rhyming was great.

    Take Care!

    -Shannon <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow i really like this...alot.....the flow is perfect...and the rhyming is perfect too.. i really dont know what to say.....you could probably do more colors..that would be awesome i know you're talented enough to do it....

    i dont see any improvement needed on this one..nice job.5/5 =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    I cant really say anything bad about this..the flow was great and you had nice descriptions and metaphors..and i liked the uniqueness of it..plus it also had emotion within each color..and the message was good..loved it! Keep up the great work! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Alissa

    Wonderful,
    this poem was really well expressed and the flow was magnificent.
    It was really heartfelt and showed your talent.
    Yet I noticed that there wasn't as much emotion in this poem as if could of had. You explain what the color of the rain and the color of sadness was, yet you didn't describe the sensation of it. This poem would really stand out if you had gone one step deeper and indulged in this piece and explained your feelings with each color.
    But in all you did great!!
    I really enjoyed it.

    P.S-
    I liked how you put punctuation in this piece,
    it was as a sweet song.
    You did fantastic.

  • 10 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Totally random poems end up incredibly great! I loved this write!!! The emotions you picked for each color were so true....this was very creative I enjoyed!

  • 10 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    Oh wow!!This was great and beautifully done.The flow seems good.Don't what to say about it but a good poem.
    Take care

  • 10 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    I love you "randomness"... I love how you made the colors represent something. You put a lot of feelings and emotions into this.. I really enjoyed this piece...

    keep it up>>>

  • 9 years ago

    by Jack Rabbit

    Amazing Job. You're a wonderful poet! 5/5