Comments : The Locket

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Kay
    What a lovely story written in this verse. Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very beauftiful and sentimental....sometimes we forget that our parents started out as young lovers....

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    Enriched with vivid and elaborate details, the poem itself was a masterpiece. It's too beautiful for words.

    Sweet. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was beautiful , could just feel the love in that , wonderful job and a pleasure to read, keep it up, your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Poetess

    I'm not sure why, but this made me cry. Such a beautiful story of love. And the whole aged locket made it more sentimental. Very beautiful write. I loved it. 5/5

    ` Liz =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Deana

    This was very touching,people were so much more romantic back then,how great. excellent job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Awwwe. This is the cutest poem! It was sweet and sentimental. I loved the rhythm. Great job!

  • 9 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    Awwe, dearest, this is so sweet! Is it a true story? One thing though, I noticed. All of your lines rhyme in a AABB structure, except for the last two lines don't rhyme =(

    All in all, this is such a great poem. The rhyming isn't forced and it has such unique wording. The flow is so effortless. AH! I love it. Thanks for sharing, lovely.

  • 9 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    Awwe, dearest, this is so sweet! Is it a true story? One thing though, I noticed. All of your lines rhyme in a AABB structure, except for the last two lines don't rhyme =(

    All in all, this is such a great poem. The rhyming isn't forced and it has such unique wording. The flow is so effortless. AH! I love it. Thanks for sharing, lovely.

  • 8 years ago

    by Scrittore

    I had shivers reading this, it is how I hope that the man I love so dearly will propose to me. I've wanted a locket since I was like two years old. Amazing poem, you really seem to touch many with it!