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What a lovely story written in this verse. Great job!
Take Care Cindy
Very beauftiful and sentimental....sometimes we forget that our parents started out as young lovers....
Enriched with vivid and elaborate details, the poem itself was a masterpiece. It's too beautiful for words.
by Tracy D Rollings
WOW that was beautiful , could just feel the love in that , wonderful job and a pleasure to read, keep it up, your friend Tracy d 5/5
I'm not sure why, but this made me cry. Such a beautiful story of love. And the whole aged locket made it more sentimental. Very beautiful write. I loved it. 5/5
` Liz =]
This was very touching,people were so much more romantic back then,how great. excellent job.
by Rachel RTVW
Awwwe. This is the cutest poem! It was sweet and sentimental. I loved the rhythm. Great job!
Awwe, dearest, this is so sweet! Is it a true story? One thing though, I noticed. All of your lines rhyme in a AABB structure, except for the last two lines don't rhyme =(
All in all, this is such a great poem. The rhyming isn't forced and it has such unique wording. The flow is so effortless. AH! I love it. Thanks for sharing, lovely.
I had shivers reading this, it is how I hope that the man I love so dearly will propose to me. I've wanted a locket since I was like two years old. Amazing poem, you really seem to touch many with it!