Return to My Planet

by Goran Rahim   Aug 10, 2007


Ripping apart my innocent heart,
You are not in my planet like before.
Similar to the moon in the sky,
I see your beauty, but you are not near anymore.

Tonight, awake all alone time is gone,
One was over, it was two, and now it is three.
Still up, writing a poem,
As your love would not set me free.

How many nights you want me to spend?
With this so called love pain; silently.
Imagine just one sleepless night,
How it feels? Answer me honestly.

Please return to my planet,
As it is full of adore.
Don't get lost in your own world,
We can share the same planet, I am sure.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    There isnt enough words to descirbe this beautiful poem trust me on this. Dast Xosh.

  • 16 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Wow this was so good, you're such a great poet, but I'm sure you hear that all the time. But the poem was beautiful, emotional, definantly a 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by TracyM

    Wow, i can really feel the pain and sadness it this poem, along withe the love. its beautifully well written.

    xx trace

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Excellent. Very heartfelt and touching, but also sad. I think it was beautifully written and I love your word choice, especially in the opening line. This poem also flowed really well. Good Job.

    -Shannon <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Creative, simple, intresting, excellent word choice, again you have written a nicely penned poem Keep up the good work. 5/5

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