Comments : Sweetheart

  • 10 years ago

    by Tiffaney

    Thats sweet

  • 10 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    This poem is really good except i dont really like how you use "you" alot. you can find ways of saying things without using "you" all the time.

  • 10 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Aww seriously give it to her.

    a suggestion mite be instead of making your knees weak, try something like "you make my heart skip a beat" maybe? idk its catchy in my eyes. she'll love it =]] any gurl would <3

  • 10 years ago

    by needing a miracle

    Very nice.

  • 10 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Aww that was sooo sweat i liked how you wrote that very romantical i really liked it 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by ASH

    Luv it
    its just tooooo cute lol