Always in my eye

by cassanova   Aug 17, 2007


I got an etcher sketch,
all i see is your face,
i shake it all day,
but it doesn't erase,

i close my eyes,
and your there,
i open my eyes,
and still you appear,

you haunt my dreams,
day and night,
no matter where i look,
you're in my sight,

you're stuck in my eye,
and wont go away,
its painfull thats true,
but i hope that you stay,

you've been gone for awhile,
but i still see your face,
no matter how hard i shake,
you can not be erased........

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  • 16 years ago

    by tearsnkisses

    I like this poem too...i just recently overcame this current problem!! i connect with this one so much...KEEP IT UP!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Milton

    I know how this feeling is. I once had a day where I actually thought I saw her everywhere or on other people's faces. it's a pain. but good stuff

  • 16 years ago

    by Suicide With A Smile

    It's so cute!! I like how you take things from the past like the etcher sketcher i had one when i was a kid but now it's gone.. you had him but now he's gone too.. nice resemblence!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by resisting reason

    Yet another amazing poem, very original, awesome

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Hey..u were right wit dis one..i like dis one:]..ill go check out da others.