Comments : I know you want to be here, but heavens much to far.

  • 10 years ago

    by Katrina

    It so sad but you expressed your feelings so well and i am so sorry! 5/5 i loved it! its full of emotion!

  • 10 years ago

    by dAnCe4aDrEaM

    Thank you so much

  • 9 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Woow this is a realy good poem soo good i had to read it twice it even brought tears to my eyes. you are e very good writer and i know how you feel ive been there before with my bestfriend to. i hope it all works out in the end take care. kasia 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Cara

    Aww i realli luv it. lil kids tease each other all the time, dont beat urself up. its a sad story, but u told it well.
    5/5
    xx

  • 9 years ago

    by jane

    Soooo sad....but i like it

  • 9 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    Wow!!
    i absolutely loved this poem!
    it was amazingg!!!
    the flow was fantastic and you expressed yerself so well. there were sad parts, funny ones too. i loved that.
    im sry to hear about yer friend but kno she's watching over you. i can relate to your loss.
    keep up the nice work!!

  • 5 years ago

    by DirgeVenustas

    This was amazing. going on my favorites. this would translate very well to slam poetry. great job