I love it.
great job.
5/5

Its so cute and well written its flows with emotion!

Wow that poem was great i love the wording and the emotion in this poem
xox well done

I love that feeling of being able to fall asleep holding and being held by the person you love, there really is nothing better, and it has quite often run through my head the thought that it couldn't be real and I was going to wake up in my own bed. I liked this, I liked the feelings it made me relive esspecialy.
thanks for sharing. keep it up.

I know those moments seem like a dream because it is the time you get what you were wanting, so that is why it feel that way,
you have truly great emotions and feelings in this poem, you have showed your great talent.
keep it up dear.

Excellent -poem
feels very written off experiance
to know what that feels like
and to show that shows how well its written

Great poem...it flowed nicely and gave off such a loving vibe=]

Brooke<3

That was so sweet. It was so cute and written so well. It was a beautiful poem, and i am glad to have read it.
love Tara-Kay
x

We're just so excited.
^ This line doesn't sound right to me.

Stream down my face so slow.
I just want you to hold me so close,
^ Don't use "so" twice one line after anothter.

This was sweet, it conveyed your message yet was not to graphic. I think your poetry could be improved a lot by using better vocabulary. The flow was okay but some of the rhymes sounded a little bit off. I liked the emotion in it though. So my main advice is to use better vocabulary and descriptions. 4/5

I liked this piece alot, but some of the lines just didn't work with the rest of the poem. but i loved the way you captured and described the moment. there were some words you over used aswell. like "we". but over all i thought it was good. 4/5

Hmmmm how sweet!......... im so touch seems u really inspire and it has a great expressing ur emotion and love! perfectly extreme and very worded words..... the flow is great even the structure.. it is well written and excellent work so u deserve to get 5/5

keep it up! love it.........

This so adorable....

The imagery was beautiful, and the emotion's familiar to myself. It flow really well, and the poem it's self was smile causing..

Truly a touching poem,
Very sweet.
5/5 Elaine.

You really brought me to the idea that it is already late and i have to go to sleep.
But perfect flow, nice rhyme and easy to understand

Wow..0_o

this is really great..^_____^

"So JUST hold me tight,
..As I close my eyes."
it's like..you feel so safe and whole by his side and you need not say anything more..

i love how you wrote this, so very full of emotions..^__^
another fave! 5/5!

I liked the consecutive rhyes very much. They are really nicely penned. The flow is alos good in this piece. You have managed to keep it cool and lovely. I gave you just 5/5

Tc dear
Fsams

Wow thats sooo beautiful
Is this a dream?
Because it doesn't seem real.
But I'm so glad it is,
Because our true love is what I feel.

wow!

Great poem 5/5

Awe. this was a very beautiful write. the emotions were intense, of course. And overall, it was a very touching piece and a heartfelt read. This poem, at the end, made me smile. (: [and i dont like to smile] The power of your words are strong! lol. :D anyway. great write. 5/5.