This is so good, its really unique and thats a good thing, its different but in a good way, the wording used expressed emotions well, and the title was so awesomely chosen.
This was so sad yet i loved every line.
With love, Tara-Kay
I love this piece. The use of colors as moods is great, the images and wording are wonderful and the repetition of the ending lines really re-enforces the emotion and meaning of the poem. For most of our lives are spent in shades of grey. This is a very deep, extremely well written piece.