Concentrating your thoughts to a superior writing, keeps our reading go courage, its like a blooming blossom that continues the day go bright. You poems I read, your expressions I studied, your feelings I valued. All and all you deserve, its almost an excellent one I should say. ( 'I mean your writing'). Keep writing, bring more poems and keep me informed, to enable me to feel free to read your interesting poem lettering. Thanks for now, more thanks to follow.. bye!
Really heart felting
keep up the good work.
God bless u
10 years ago
It took me a while to get the shape thingy but i got it, it is pretty cool. i wish i could do that with mine, it was a unique poem, very interesting, sweet and of course cute, another great poem from you, excellent job 5/5
This poem was quite sweet I enjoyed reading it not only onces but twice. I didn't find this piece to be cliche because I could feel the emotions straight from the heart and they were not just your basic emotions of love. Shape poetry oh so hard but you did pull it off so I give you credit for that. Well done on creating a lovely piece. Keep up the good work. ~Mel
Good poem. I've done shape poetry before. This poem was wonderfully written as well. Unfortunatly I didn't figure what the shape is but I'm sure it looked nice. All you had to do was use dashes(hyphens) to space out the lines to create the shape on here.
The word choice was simple but effective, the flow was great, and the emotion and message both clear and strong. I must say that you are clever, I have seen all kinds of things you have came up with, and I admire that. Keep up the good work, and please keep us on our toes. 5/5