Comments : Oh my angel (Shape)

  • 10 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    Very unique poem I have come across. The shape is nice, I checked it. The wordings are beautiful.

    So Sweet
    So relavent and captivating

    With love CMP

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Wow it's pretty amazing
    My weekly contest vote goes to this hun
    This was so sweet
    keep it up,
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Concentrating your thoughts to a superior writing, keeps our reading go courage, its like a blooming blossom that continues the day go bright. You poems I read, your expressions I studied, your feelings I valued. All and all you deserve, its almost an excellent one I should say. ( 'I mean your writing'). Keep writing, bring more poems and keep me informed, to enable me to feel free to read your interesting poem lettering. Thanks for now, more thanks to follow.. bye!

    Luz and Naz
    (the two dimensions

  • 10 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Beautiful poem!!!
    Really heart felting
    keep up the good work.

    God bless u

  • 10 years ago

    by nikki

    It took me a while to get the shape thingy but i got it, it is pretty cool. i wish i could do that with mine, it was a unique poem, very interesting, sweet and of course cute, another great poem from you, excellent job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very emotional, with a lot of feeling in it. I like the form, it is very interesting. Whole piece sound so sincere which makes it truly beautiful and meaningful. The flow is great.
    Keep writing!

  • 10 years ago

    by Unwitted

    Very nice poem and the most unique poem I have ever read.
    5/5 for sure
    GOD BLES U

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Fsams
    What a beautiful piece. Words of love so many long to hear.
    Excellent job my friend.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 10 years ago

    by Angie

    Very unique, the shape is an angel.... beautiful write....

  • 10 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    A nice write but a little cliche just my opinion however 4/5

  • 10 years ago

    by MakeBelieveLove

    Very good... loved that while I was reading it i really didnt get caught up in the rhyme. It was so smooth... in other words great flow. Job Well done... 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was quite sweet I enjoyed reading it not only onces but twice. I didn't find this piece to be cliche because I could feel the emotions straight from the heart and they were not just your basic emotions of love. Shape poetry oh so hard but you did pull it off so I give you credit for that. Well done on creating a lovely piece. Keep up the good work. ~Mel

  • 10 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. I've done shape poetry before. This poem was wonderfully written as well. Unfortunatly I didn't figure what the shape is but I'm sure it looked nice. All you had to do was use dashes(hyphens) to space out the lines to create the shape on here.
    Anyway...good job..5/5

    Keep it up && Take Care!

    -Shannon <3

  • 10 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Fsams, that was very beautiful.

    It touches the heart, and makes you cry:) I really liked the flow, and how much emotion you put into it with simple words.

    Amazing,
    5/5 Elaine.

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa

    The word choice was simple but effective, the flow was great, and the emotion and message both clear and strong. I must say that you are clever, I have seen all kinds of things you have came up with, and I admire that. Keep up the good work, and please keep us on our toes. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by janiL

    Aww..T_T *tear*

    this was flawlessly penned..
    I have nothing else to say..

    Feel free
    Believe me
    I am true
    I love you

    this is BEAUTIFUL..

  • 10 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    Wow this is my first experience of a properly done shape poem. it was beautiful. such serene words of love. i think you've inspired me to attempt a shape poem myself. nice read, well done
    xoxo

  • 10 years ago

    by the come back

    Soo sweet........nice pick of topic......5/5 ^_^

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    Awe so swet. very romantic. its hard to dins sometimes these type of poetry realy lovely poem.
    you deserve 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    This is very sweet and tender. I know that I have also craved to hold the one that I love, especially lately.

    You have penned this very nicely and on the same hand captivated the reader.

    Well done.

    --Sher