Comments : Falling in love

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Very beautiful! This is much better than anything I could come up with! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "My heart to forgets" << My heart too forgets.

    " love you so true,
    Even you can't do
    I'm thinking of you,
    But I didn't know if you also do "
    ^^ Flow isn't good, at all.

    The first two stanzas were great, I loved them, honest to god. But, .. The ending I didn't like as well. The flow was off, and it didn't make much sense to me.

    I did get the idea and meaning, along with the emotion, and I'm pretty sure those were decent.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marissa Marzano

    Great job!
    i like it alot.

    Marissa

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Some rhyming was forced, however the beauty of love and emotions of yours came through this poem. Great job, 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Eminent Bard

    Wow...dami na palang nag co2mment sa mga poems mo ah..keep up da good work,,.! nice poem ha..^o^ 5/5