Endless Void (The beginning of the End)

by Eclipse   Sep 5, 2007


Benign thoughts,
Destroyed by time,
and wilt like flowers
as pages turn.
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He knows too well,
What lies ahead,
but ignorance consumes his head,
'One Life' they say,
'One Life' is all,
but all he sees is emptiness.

Within his reach,
theres nothing there,
His goal, his aim, his destination,
All gone without a trace.
He stands alone,
with no remorse,
Regret is not an option.

He chose this life,
He knew the cause,
His pain is his to suffer,
Once ruined,
His life cannot recur,
Demise controls his fate.

As time goes by,
and space extends,
the world seems far too real,
Hes one in many, yet
one in few,
who live their lives this way.

Without a care,
and no self-worth,
He sees what hes become,
The single thing,
he once held dear,
has crumbled into pieces.

Straight into the depths of hell,
he looks, but
finds it sooner,
to notice it for what it is,

His life,
an Endless Void

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  • 16 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Again another amazing poem, your really able to write everything so well, nothing seems forced or over done. well done! loved reading it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lenny

    'He knows too well,
    What lies ahead,
    but ignorance consumes his head,'
    Accidental rhyme...thats the only thing that annoyed me. Upset the flow a bit.
    Otherwise its like woah. Good vocab, and topic, hmmm, a mary-sue close to home perhaps? ;)

    Great poem. Love the first stanza.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Amazing poem is this, excellent expressions are given, I am really proud to serve you with my comments so as to ascend this poem with more reputations.... Keep up your pretty good writing and looking forward more like this...

    Its we,

    Luz and Naz
    (the two dimensions)

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