Comments : Read between the lines

  • 10 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Do i get low points for barely understanding it? good job

    your servant:
    david

  • 10 years ago

    by trixibelle

    No your insane if you do

  • 9 years ago

    by Lenny

    I like it. It seems like one of those school inspired poems though, where you're assigned something to write for each line. The end picks up a bit, I like the rhetorical questions, and you do darken it down quite successfully.