I think this would be better read in long stanzas, instead of small fragmets. The story to it was really good. 5/5

marcella

Adding a certain form would help the flow, but that is completly your choice. I think the way you write is unique. But nothing like a bit of critique.:)
I really liked the content, and you sent a good message.

Well penned,
--Elly.

I really like this stanza..

Once all three are in sync
For that one special person
You are truly in love

I haven't found my true love yet.. I'm not sure if my former love is really love :( I hope it is..

Anyway once again you've done a good job. keep up the good work!