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by Lonely Little Dreamer
The flow was great and i loved the last line..it struck with power. The emotion was definitely felt. Great job and keep it up!
Very emotional and greatly written. You managed to create truly unique atmosphere in this piece. I like the ending very much, it's effective, and the choice of words is good through the whole poem.
5/5 from me