Comments : You're in for an Epiphany

  • 11 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    The flow was great and i loved the last line..it struck with power. The emotion was definitely felt. Great job and keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very emotional and greatly written. You managed to create truly unique atmosphere in this piece. I like the ending very much, it's effective, and the choice of words is good through the whole poem.
    Keep up
    5/5 from me