Comments : Struggle

  • 16 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    Amazing!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    Who would'nt vote on such an open poem like this....?
    I really like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    This is an awesome as poem i luv it :P
    it flowed real good and showed great emotion, i kinda relate to it (trying to find a reason to live)
    my favourite line would have to be this
    "Darkness has swallowed all hope," idk y that line just stands out to me

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jessica

    Wow this is a great poem good job i would love to get to know u better

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Wwwoooowww very good poem 5/5
    kasia

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Wow,amazing poem,perfect!

  • 16 years ago

    by hopefulsmile

    Great work i like it soo much, as i'm one of peaple who like to read sad poems i really reading yours.keep the good work :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Dragon Slayer

    Spatulair poem!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    This poem cant even be described on how good it is 5/5 Good job

  • 15 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Wow that is really sad, yet beautiful, i loved it!
    i give it a 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Wow.. Great poem

    The whole thing overall was amazing and breathtaking. Even if it was sad, there was something about it that just made you want to keep reading it, a few times actually!!!