That was just great, specially the last part, i loved it. 5/5

I really like this one aswel. the language you used s really professional and sophisticated. The end piece really made it great. xxx alex xxx

I'm telling you, some of your imagery might be hard to grasp as in ashes of galaxies slip through your fingers, but other than that it was a great poem

your servant:
atticus

WGJASKLDGJASD.
Lmfao. I feel so stupid. THAT WAS A PROSE BEFORE. I should have known. GollyMe.

Amazing job, though Sheena.
I love this. (: It's like, seriously amazing.
The wording and such, and the flow, of course I didn't pause after each break. (:
I'm glad I didn't, too.

Amazing job.
Keep it up.

I freaking love this. It's great and it's different and... wow.

To be truthful, one of my favorite parts of reading poetry is enjoying the rhyme, the coordinated lines, the matter of perfection they seem to aiming for. Your poems blow that out of the water... they are what they are and it's that easy.

Take this poem, for example. No one could have made that first line work well in a completely normal poetic setting. They would have given up on it, although it is an amazing line.

You threw caution to the wind, so to speak, and made it work excellently.

*favorite authors list* lol.

great work

I didnt like this one..

Sorry. It didnt flow for me.. and I didnt like the story plot. :/

I really like this poem. It's very different and unique. It's a sad piece yet so beautifully penned. I thought that you did an amazing job on this, the imagery was flawless.

"I could pour acid into your bowels if that's how you'd prefer to stop your heartbeat."

I LOVE that line! It's so unique and powerful!

5/5 Take Care!

-Shannon <3

The words you chose threwout this poem were just BRILLIANT!! *Looks as thow her mind has been blown* wow...
JayJ

And after all that, never forget: I'll always care about you, but you don't mean a thing to me.
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I love these lines. This poem is written amazingly. I loved it. It captures a lot in it and it's perfect. Great job 5/5

Wow I'm impressed, this was beautifuly penned, and I'm glad that you broke it up into versus, or else it would be kinda hard on the eyes. But great vocabulary, strong emotions and a magnificent piece.
Blessings
Wallace

Freaking excellent!
I'm lost for words... Fabulous prose!
5/5
*Gem*

This was a good poem involving in every way I loved the way you worded everything and the almost sadistic was you played off every word was well done I gave you a 5 Plot121

Its a tad bit morbid but that explains why its catergorized under "Dark Poems"
I like it. Not suprisingly.
You did good work on it. :)
Although it seems that you were a tad bit angered with someone. :/

Wow this poem is filled with such hatred and such a pure and unwavering dislike that it brought shivers to my spine. I did what you said and read it as a whole instead of breaking it into paragraphs and your right its does sound better that way. I know this probably isn't what its about but it almost seems to me like the person in the poem really liked the other person but they hurt them to much so they are trying to show them what its like. And they want them to hurt like the first person hurt before. Very graphic details, but that's part of what made this poem so enjoyable. Nice work.