You know I really like what you did with this poem. I love how you asked one little question and got so many good answers. I think this just might be my favorite poem right now. I would like to keep reading more of your poems so keep writing. that poem really got me thinking and when I read it i kind of felt some think so good job.
Truly amazing!... i agree with u on:
If it's true then why do people fall in love?
Why do people call it a gift from above?
I kept thinking that love is a horrible tool
People use it to punish others, love is cruel
hey iam also adding u on my fav.
Wish u more talent:)
Amazing !! Great poem, every single word you wrote was just perfect.
And love is all that, it is the magic but also the heartache.
It can make you "fall to your knees and cry" but at the same time "restore your life and give you wings to fly".
People also cant help falling in love it just happens, its incontrollable.
Anyway its a beautiful piece def. one of my favorites. Great writing, wish you the best.
That poem is so true both sides are right you just need to be really careful with your feelings tho dont leave them hangin on the line just to have the bad side of love destroy your heart coz once its shattered you cant glue it back together in just a couple of days... it takes longer... i should know.
I don't know why people keep try to describ love. If you are in love no matter you get sorrow or happiness, heaven/hell. If you are in love you have to accept both. in the way of love you will get flowers and throun and you have to walk both of them. If you can't do this, please don't fall in love.
And trust me, when you are in love it is a great and wonderful thing. And yes it can hurt but it can make you stronger in many ways. But don't get confused with other kind of levels of love that are out there in the big scary yet wonderful world....