Comments : Questions crossing my mind

  • 10 years ago

    by kimberly dennis

    You know I really like what you did with this poem. I love how you asked one little question and got so many good answers. I think this just might be my favorite poem right now. I would like to keep reading more of your poems so keep writing. that poem really got me thinking and when I read it i kind of felt some think so good job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Its a great write.Very important questions n wth simple answers.Keep up the good work.
    5/5
    God bless u

  • 10 years ago

    by Meme

    WOW!!
    U really define the true meaning of love n u have never treid it before
    u rally have a great talent inside just keep on writin u might end up bein a great writer someday

    keep it up 5/5

    ~gIrL~

  • 10 years ago

    by Salwa

    Breathtaking words on the meaning of love..............its beautiful, and written with such honesty about deep, personal questions..........

    i hope everyone gets the chance to read this.........and if YOU, yourself have doubt.....read it, again.

    salam
    salwa~

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Love is many things....but most of all it is a joy in our heart. It is the one thing that makes life worth living.

    Beautiful poem by you.

    Best wishes,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 9 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Oh, forgot to tell you: check out my poem called 'the meaning of the word love' I think you will like it very much. You will find your answer there.

  • 9 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Woow that was a really good poem. I really injoyed reading that poem. Its very deep and shows your true feelings and how you really feel about love, 5/5
    kasia

  • 9 years ago

    by Ruby Red Memories

    You write very full on and I think thats a good thing because it allows us to see into you and feel there is a truth behind the words you write. It felt like there was feeling in this not just words

  • 9 years ago

    by letmedie2night

    Beautiful absolutly beauitful i love that poem... words cant describe how much i love that poem... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    *applause* wow... this is a great piece... nice contadiction between the lines... thumbs up

  • 9 years ago

    by SweeT pOisOn

    Wow....simply...they r really some hard questions to ans...keep up the good work!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Girl Behind the Mask

    Many questions i ask myself throughout the day....

  • 9 years ago

    by Nolaaa

    *sigh* that was great...i think alot of people can read that and relate; i know i can♥

  • 9 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Nice poem
    the questions were different
    but you did a great job
    5/5
    xx

  • 9 years ago

    by Coldstone

    Truly amazing!... i agree with u on:
    If it's true then why do people fall in love?
    Why do people call it a gift from above?
    I kept thinking that love is a horrible tool
    People use it to punish others, love is cruel
    hey iam also adding u on my fav.
    Wish u more talent:)

  • 9 years ago

    by Nawa

    Amazing !! Great poem, every single word you wrote was just perfect.

    And love is all that, it is the magic but also the heartache.
    It can make you "fall to your knees and cry" but at the same time "restore your life and give you wings to fly".
    People also cant help falling in love it just happens, its incontrollable.

    Anyway its a beautiful piece def. one of my favorites. Great writing, wish you the best.

  • 9 years ago

    by Crystal

    That poem is so true both sides are right you just need to be really careful with your feelings tho dont leave them hangin on the line just to have the bad side of love destroy your heart coz once its shattered you cant glue it back together in just a couple of days... it takes longer... i should know.

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    I don't know why people keep try to describ love. If you are in love no matter you get sorrow or happiness, heaven/hell. If you are in love you have to accept both. in the way of love you will get flowers and throun and you have to walk both of them. If you can't do this, please don't fall in love.

    bye keep smile

  • And trust me, when you are in love it is a great and wonderful thing. And yes it can hurt but it can make you stronger in many ways. But don't get confused with other kind of levels of love that are out there in the big scary yet wonderful world....

    And don't worry.... You're not alone!!!