Comments : The Cell Phone

  • 10 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Awww i hate whan that happends, u wanna know something scary i had a dream about some1 dying, and know i read this.... wellnice poem though i loved the flow.. it was GREAT
    5/5 always
    ur favorite
    Kate~

  • 10 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    Well done davey nice ending. later lemon squeezy

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Okay.
    I frigging loved this.
    The whole piece has so much power and intensity throughout.
    Wording and rhyme scheme are wonderfully done, and the ending blew me away...it has such power that it hits the reader like a slap in the face..I love this.
    There is nothing I would change.
    Perfect.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    This one kills me literitly i hate how u ended no offense thats sad, really it is. but other than that it was great! 5/5 always
    ur fav
    Kate~

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    this is a tragedy! I'm thinking or romeo and juliet!